BlueAlpha14's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Movies According to the Title]

Pretty humorous for the most part, a very original concept. Animation was good, overall. However you may want to change the rating to T because of that stabbing thing on the Bridge of Spies short, just to be 100% safe.

YouDecide responds:

Thanks for the advice, I changed the rating to T

[sword fight]

Well, it's better than stick figures anyways. The thumbnail was kinda clickbait, which is something you should avoid heavily. I will say I do like the flow of the animation and the sound effects, it certainly has more effort put into it than some of the submissions on the movie portal. However, be sure to improve on art styles and designs.

[Help Us]

I didn't really understand the story. The animation was also a bit.. eh. However that ending was creepy as hell.

[Political Sex Ed.]

It wasn't bad. The dialogue was surprisingly accurate but I can tell those voices aren't by real people. I also noticed Trump's line trailed off at the end. Trump's design was a bit too young. He looked like he was in his 30's. You may want to use references. The animation consistency is random, as the character models would jump to the next movement instead of transitioning. Also that watermark is horrendously distracting, it practically butchers the animation entirely. However, it seems to be an ok movie, it just needs work.

[Stickman Vs Treadmill]

The beginning screen doesn't spell 'treadmill' correctly, and that's a problem considering that's the thumbnail. It's an OK concept, rather the figures look like cut-out's pasted on to a screen with animation. However, at least there was effort put into it.

HappyCorpGames responds:

I actually spelt it wrong on purpose, with the dumb music it adds to the weirdness but I do see what you mean. I'll remember this in the future.

[Dad kill a entire family!!]

Umm.. where do I start? It's promising but this seems like a mere WIP. I didn't understand the animation and the characters weren't drawn very well. There also isn't much of a storyline. The family eats dinner, his food grows faces, and then the rest is history. It'd be great if you could construct on this more, but this version is kind of a let down.

[tumps out to get ya]

You shouldn't call @pankclaw a grammar Nazi. Improper spelling is highly unprofessional (that is, if you're striving towards being a professional animator). I get you're from a different country where you speak a different language but still, this is a name we're referring to.
As for the submission the art style was ok, could use a lot more detail. The voice was actually very clear, so props for that. For a simple animation it's promising, but needs more work.

sugurghost responds:

yeah i guess i went overboard there and at the time when i did this i think my keyboard dosent work that good that i forgot to look if the r was thier
oh and thanks im still working on improving in animation