BlueAlpha14's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Movies According to the Title]

Pretty humorous for the most part, a very original concept. Animation was good, overall. However you may want to change the rating to T because of that stabbing thing on the Bridge of Spies short, just to be 100% safe.

YouDecide responds:

Thanks for the advice, I changed the rating to T

[Stickman Vs Treadmill]

The beginning screen doesn't spell 'treadmill' correctly, and that's a problem considering that's the thumbnail. It's an OK concept, rather the figures look like cut-out's pasted on to a screen with animation. However, at least there was effort put into it.

HappyCorpGames responds:

I actually spelt it wrong on purpose, with the dumb music it adds to the weirdness but I do see what you mean. I'll remember this in the future.

[tumps out to get ya]

You shouldn't call @pankclaw a grammar Nazi. Improper spelling is highly unprofessional (that is, if you're striving towards being a professional animator). I get you're from a different country where you speak a different language but still, this is a name we're referring to.
As for the submission the art style was ok, could use a lot more detail. The voice was actually very clear, so props for that. For a simple animation it's promising, but needs more work.

sugurghost responds:

yeah i guess i went overboard there and at the time when i did this i think my keyboard dosent work that good that i forgot to look if the r was thier
oh and thanks im still working on improving in animation

[The Merky Muttheadz EP. 1 "The Messengers"]

Nice animation but there's a lot of blank spots that need coloring in. Unless that's intentional.

TheMerkyMuttheadz responds:

Thanks! and yeah and no. I did the drawings by hand and put them into photoshop but I liked the look so I didn't try to fix it up. This was and my very 1st animation ever though so I will keep trying to improve lol

[Cosby Love Assumption Song]

It was alright, the song was quite funny. It took me a while to understand it. However, it does seem a bit inappropriate to be E.
The animation was nice, but for the most it lacked background. The ending was also annoying.

PooCart responds:

Thanks for the review. I only rated it as I did because it doesn't really have any nudity, swear words etc. The lack of background was a simplistic style I hoped to use to make it stand out. Thanks again for reviewing :)

[my first flash animation ( sorry for quality)]

Dang, when I saw "stick animation" I was expecting some lame 5 second walking animation of a poorly drawn stick figure. THIS though is a different story. The animation is very smooth and the figures seem to be animated very sharp. I also notice one of your tags are 'first animation'. If that's the case, I can't wait to see what you can do in the future.

Psiptak responds:

well before i made this animation, i made few "5 seconds lame animations" but i didnt even save them on my pc, and i watched few tutorials, my "inspiration" was https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v94yw9gfrQw and dragon ball z battle of gods (this very fast fighting scene in the middle), i had some problems finding the sound for it tho :D. Thank you i hope i will get better in the future

[Dark Soul - More like die souls..]

Not bad. Not perfect, but not bad either. Wish you luck on your future of animating!

The only problems are is the characters are drawn a little weird.

ChefToons responds:

Yeah one of the knights is soo ugly :D haha i cringe when i see him as well. This was as much an experiment, "can i actually make 2 characters talk to each other?" .